Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Khoya- Back in Black



So right now, I've just started working with Khoya in it's second avatar with the Toy Lab (website coming sooooon)
 I've been thinking about all the narrative possibilities with the I-pad and how 'storytelling' would evolve through it.
So far, a lot of the narrative explorations with the Ipad haven't really opened up to what 'Touch' can do to a story, they seem to be a translation of a book onto 
another medium with minor adaptations like being able to turn a page or make somethings on screen move around.
Imagine...it's the first time we have here Word, Image, Sound, Movement, Time and Touch come together to create a narrative experience. 
It's fascinating! :) 
As you may remember, 'Khoya' means lost, and it's a fantasy narrative for children and adults about the disappearing natural world and the power of the imagination to re-establish a link with childhood, with love and with nature.
In the second chapter, it deals entirely with the Earth element and becomes a journey into the imagination. I've just about started initial interactive explorations with the Ipad but some of the ideas are turning out to be very exciting and unlike anything I've ever heard before.
Bringing together the technological and the tangible. Magic and Machinery. :) 





Back in Black

Lets do a Recap Shall we? :)

Khoya is an interactive fantasy novel for children Illustrated, Animated, Conceptualized
and partly written by me.
What makes it interactive is that is uses a technology called Augmented Reality to bridge the gap between the tangible (a book) and the technological.
It also bridges my two loves (amongst many)- animation and print.
How it does this is that the book has a variety of 'markers' or symbols with limericks on how to use them, the reader, while reading a page, picks up these markers and brings it to their webcam, and using visual recognition the marker triggers off an animation in real time. So in a sense one 'brings the book to life'.
Using this technology one can become different characters in the book, unlock riddles or simply watch as the illustrations in the book start to move. :)
A User-interaction Video coming soon. But here are some spreads from chapter 1 for now.
It's designed for children above the age of 12.


Credit Roll:

Original concept, Illustration, Animation and Design by Shilo Shiv Suleman

Augmented Reality, programming and further conceptualization
Dhruv Nawani
Anders Sandell

Written by Shilo Shiv Suleman and Avijit Michael with inputs from Hari Adivarekar.

Contributers and Conceptualizers

Nilofer Suleman, Arshia Sattar, Molly and Maya, Anders Sandell, Ampat Varghese, Gayatri Ganju, Kunal Sen, Vani Sreekanta, Mana Dhanraj and the Toys Lab










Some writeups about Khoya :)

http://www.timeoutbangalore.com/kids/kids_preview_details.asp?code=114

from TIME OUT BANGALORE
Delving into the realm of interactive books, Priya George reports on the changing modes of storytelling.

“Children love to relate to the characters within narratives in books; that is what captivates them,” said Shilo Shiv Suleman, an illustrator who is attempting to turn that fascination into an actual immersive experience by creating books that kids can “interact” with. A final-year student of animation from the Srishti School of Art, Design and Technology, the 21-year-old, who has also worked extensively as a freelance artist, will soon publish Khoya, a book which she wrote and designed. Khoya is a traditional fantasy story about a boy and a girl in a dystopian setting in which all the spirits of the natural world have been banished. Where it differs from other children’s books is that Khoya is an experiment in interactive storytelling incorporating a technology called Augmented Reality. “Khoya came about as an attempt to bring together two very distinct, yet similar, narrative experiences – that of animation and that of books,” said Suleman.

Describing how AR works, Suleman said that each page of her book has a card with a symbol on it. The child has to hold the card up to bring this symbol in front of a webcam, which reads the image. On the screen the symbol transforms into an animated story element which takes the story forward, or provides answers to riddles on the page. “By adding an interactive element, one feels not just like an observer but a participant in the magic of the story,” said Suleman, who was helped in the software and tech aspects of the work by Dhruv Nawani, also from Srishti.

Suleman’s efforts are indicative of trends in the publishing world that expand the ways in which stories are told. Childrens’ books publishers Tulika recently introduced two of their popular titles as downloadable books that can be read on the iPhone and iPad. One of the titles they chose were Who Will Rule? ,by Meena Raghunathan, illustrated by Harsha Nagaraju, which is based loosely on an Australian aboriginal tale about what happens when a group of creatures decides that the largest sect amongst them should rule the world. The second title, Ekki Dokki, is a bilingual tale in Hindi and English written by Sandhya Rao, accompanied by Ranjan De’s illustrations, adapted from a Marathi folktale about two sisters named Ekkesvali and Dhonkesvali who meet an old woman living alone in a clearing in the middle of a forest. With the help of Fliplog, an e-book publishing framework designed and developed by Apptility Software, Tulika developed e-versions of the books with page-by-page audio (the text can be accompanied by audio, with multiple language options) and a feature where readers can record their own voices for dialogues and narration to accompany the story.

Brij Singh, Founder and CEO of Apptility, who worked on the development of the Tulika titles, said, “Fliplog is based on a belief that the reading experience as we know it is about to undergo a significant change thanks to iPad and similar devices.” Singh cited features such as the inclusion of sound and video into book packages as advantages of new book formats, along with basic elements like page swiping, the audiovisual representation of turning pages on screens. According to him, these features allow young readers to feel they are in command of the experience. “They control navigation and easily find their own way to enjoy the book,” he said.

Renu Kaushal Singh, a pre-school teacher, is mother to ten-year-old Pranav, who uses his father’s iPad to read interactive books. She felt that the fact that the book was on a gadget was what got her son interested. Although she sees advantages to the format, especially while travelling, she maintained that she would “still love to read Amar Chitra Katha and Panchatantra for my children, and would push them to read physical books”.

When asked if children are moving away from reading traditional books, Suleman said that she does notice that children prefer to google information rather than sift through books in libraries, and that movie versions of tales catch on much faster than their book counterparts. However, she remains convinced of the encompassing power of stories, regardless of their format. She recounted the origins of Khoya in a childhood fantasy she had that if she ate a seed, a tree would sprout from her stomach or her head. “This seems to be a very common childhood fantasy,” she said. “It’s this collective consciousness which makes Khoya an engaging read. So nothing much has changed.”
Downloadable book apps for Who Will Rule $1.99 (approximately Rs 100) and Ekki Dokki$2.99 (approximately Rs 200) are available on iTunes. Visit www.apple.com/itunes.
And in DNA mumbai
http://www.dnaindia.com/lifestyle/report_more-than-just-a-storybook_1473141
The initial drafts and illustrations of Shilo Shiv Suleman’s soon-to-be-released children’s book, Khoya, look promising. It narrates a tale of two children trying to change their dystopian world. But Khoya is not just a book. It holds its own secrets between the pages.
If the child has access to a computer, the internet and a webcam, Khoya lets her explore a technology called Augmented Reality. Each page comes with a card that has a riddle and symbol on it.
The child can visit the website listed in the book, switch the webcam on, and put the card in front of it. If she takes out a card shaped like an eye patch, slips it over her eye, and stands in front of the webcam with another card held close to her heart, the screen will identify the cards, while the child sees herself transform into one of the characters on screen. In some cases, the image serves as a clue to where the narrative is headed; in others, the child will suddenly find herself with one of the story’s characters sitting on her shoulder and cawing into the ear.
Technology in fantasy
Suleman, however, wasn’t so ambitious when she first set out to write and illustrate the book. The idea of Khoya came from the song Khoya Khoya Chand from the film Kala Bazaar (1960), a favourite of Suleman’s. That, and a childhood story she believed to be true: if you eat a seed, a tree will grow inside your stomach.
“I wanted to play with the ideas of a lost world where bizarre things happen to people. I wanted the book to be much more interactive than an ordinary book that only makes you imagine inside your head,” she says. At first, Suleman thought a pop-up book would do it, but then her animator friend, Dhruv Nawani, introduced her to Augmented Reality and she discovered how it can change the whole experience of reading a book.
The techie feel of Khoya does not, however, render it any less absorbing for kids who don’t have a computer and webcam. One can read the book as it comes, too. 
Till recently, interactivity in children’s books meant encouraging participation by introducing textures, volvelles (paper discs that can be rotated and used for calculations or to solve word games), flaps and pop-outs. But the latest innovations in IT may just change children’s storytelling forever.

Monday, April 5, 2010

Monday, March 29, 2010

redone (once again) number 3


spread 9 (there is too much text in spread 9 as of now..thats being edited)

wip for spread about the priests of the nasha.
7
However this is very much wip at the moment. the guy needs a haircut and there are people who are prostating under him and throwing money.


crow work in progress.

Saturday, March 27, 2010

reworked spread 3

and one more :)


Friday, March 26, 2010

spread 1-2-3-4-5 with text

ONE

They were young. And they were lost.

Some stories about other worlds begin with 'Once upon a time', others with 'In the beginning'.

In this world the beginning is forgotten, and sometimes vaguely remembered, by the children and Elders as Khoya – that which was lost.

The elders in Khoya told tales of What-Once-Was - a fleeting whisper of the past. They spoke of a world not constructed and constrained. A world devoid of tall glass buildings. They spoke of other beings and half beings as fluid as water and as light as breath that they called spirit. They spoke of these spirits and life that existed beyond experiments in laboratories. They spoke of colour - strange hues and pigments that spread like honey across the earth. They spoke of other life: creatures with four legs and a will of their own, wild creatures with gossamer wings that danced in the gentle wind.

To the children of Khoya the idea of a will of their own seemed unimaginable. The possibility of a natural world not created by man seemed like a myth. To try and imagine spirit felt impossible. These stories were like a jigsaw puzzle of fantastical mumbo-jumbo muddled up in the elders' memories. And soon no one listened to these tales anymore.

There was no room for fantasy here. Only routine. And magic disrupted routine.
And what's the point of a story if it isn't even real?” they said.




TWO.
However, if one is to try and rediscover What-Once-Was, if one is to attempt to pinpoint when Khoya was lost, it was possibly when the first glass box was created.

In those distant days man had lived in harmony with the spirit flowing through all things. He resonated with the spirit and recognised it in every rock, every river, every insect, every tree, every bird and every animal.

He was connected to the Great Spirit by a network of light - the Noor. The Noor was invisible to the eye but well known and seen only by the heart. And sometimes would appear to man as waves of gold dust. Other times, it would reveal itself in the sudden shimmer of a star or the shapes that clouds in the sky became. Sometimes one could see the Noor in a dancing leaf carried to it’s resting point by a curling wind. And mostly, it would reveal itself in Love.
Everyday on earth was a celebration of this love. And man's voice (strong and sweet then) was part of this great cosmic orchestra.

They would sing in crystal voices into the far reaches of space. They would spin round and round with the stars, whirling in ecstacy and complete abandon.
And yes, they were intoxicated by the Noor.

One day man and woman were inexplicably distracted while singing. He was looking up at the great expansive skies, his heart was connected by a hundred strands of gold to the Noor. When suddenly his eye caught something glimmering and hovering in the distance.

It was a firefly.

'Light that is worn by something apart from the stars', he thought. The idea of possessing light was interesting to him and he thought about it for days on end.
He wanted it. And then on, when he sang with the orchestra, it wasn't a celebration of love. It was a song of longing.

Having always lived by his need, this want was new and exciting to him. Seven days and seven nights later he saw fire again. One day when all the other creatures were asleep, he snuck up behind the firefly and trapped it in a little glass box.

He labeled this box and it gave him great pleasure that he could see it whenever he wished and it would never ever go away - it had no choice.

Soon he collected more creatures like this. He no longer sang in praise with the rest but instead arranged his collection meticulously in rows, categorically organized in terms of shape and colour.

When the other spirits approached him to ask him why he didn't sing and why he was trapping these creatures and plants he said, 'don't you see? I discovered them and so they are mine.'

The spirits didn't understand this logic at all.

But the truth is that before any Pandora's box was opened, it was first sealed up. And this incessant want to label and claim ownership over was called greed.

And thus was born the race known as the Laalach.



THREE

The men and women of Laalach were well known to be a rather tricky clan. They would, at any given opportunity, go to extreme measures to prove their might over the earth.

Some say these men and women had two faces but there is no historical record to prove this and so it remains just a metaphor in an old history book. Others say these people had an insatiable appetite, an unending desire to own more and more. However, this much is known, they slowly ate away at everything that the earth held within it and all that was left behind was the rotting refuse of an empire. This was the age of Want.

They were intoxicated by this greed and it is this addiction, this misguided intoxication and this blindness that gave birth to a dark powerful force with a life of its own - the Nasha.





The Nasha slowly engulfed man. It started as a small puff of smoke that enveloped his heart and wrapped its long vines around it. This gave him indifference.

It then spread to his chest that swelled up as his lungs were taken over by the Nasha. This gave him pride.

Next it spread to his throat and wound its vines around his neck nearly choking him. This gave him cold silence.

Then to his eyes dilating his pupils into blanks stares making him lose sight of the spirit.

And thus having wrapped itself around every nerve and entered every stream that ran through man's body it finally penetrated his mind. This brought him death. And not death of the spirit (for the spirit lives forever) or death of love (because love exists beyond that) but the death of his compassion. Which is the worst end of all.






FOUR
The spirits were chased out one by one. Poisonous gases were released into the world that punched holes into the layers of Noor that protected and enveloped the earth like a soft glowing blanket.

Homes were destroyed. Forests burnt down. The sky began to fall, the earth began to quake. Spirit fought back. The sky would cry for days, flooding the earth. His greed to control spirit brought terror. Gases that turned generations of children to dust. His greed to possess land brought wars. And soon it wasn't even land anymore. Soon it was oil, then water. and last but most tragically - The Battles of Breath.

With holes in his sky, with a hole where a heart once existed, surrounded by chaos the men of Laalach had to make a choice - either he embraced the spirit and restored it to a magnificence of its own, let go of his control and need to consume and lived in harmony. Or he could build more walls and banish the spirit forever.

And of course, he chose to banish.

So he created a glass globe around the earth to block out the clouds that became animals in the sky. He shut out the stars that looked down upon the earth like eyes.

He created large concrete bottlestoppers that stopped rivers from flowing. He scooped out all the multitudes of fish and life in the ocean and replaced it with plastic that he'd consumed and spat out.

Until nothing was left behind. The elements were divided, and were cursed to stay divided as layers atop the glass globe.

Remember poor Hansel and Gretel who got lost in their woods? The people of Khoya had got lost in their own miniature labyrinths and could find the kingdoms of love no more.

The world faded, diminished and disintegrated into smaller and smaller histories until finally becoming the one we know. Like a crystal prism that had been preserved for centuries to unleash a rainbow but had shattered into tiny fragments.

Cold, brittle and weak, the empires of man-made catastrophe eroded the soul like dirt off cliffs that drift in winds into beautiful tragedies of 'What-once-Was'.


Children were lined up in rows of gray, with glassy eyes of conformity gazing upon nothing. A vacant expression branded upon their faces with no decipherable features of beauty or ugliness. Their minds trained not to think, not to question. This was the age of mediocrity and these were the voices of a forgotten generation of zombies. Jaded and incomplete but told to feel otherwise, these children are laid to rest in an adult frame with the once beating heart of a child.

This was Khoya. A mistake. A generation of alienation. And where our story begins.

Thursday, March 18, 2010

spread 4

planning O_-


Wednesday, March 17, 2010

1


They were young. And they were Lost.
Some stories about other worlds begin with 'Once upon a time', others with 'In the beginning'. 
In this world the beginning is not known.
This World, sometimes forgotten and sometimes vaguely remembered by the Children and elders as 'Khoya': What was lost.
The elders in khoya tell tales of 'What-once-was'. A feeble whisper of the past. They spoke of a world not constructed and constrained. A world devoid of tall glass buildings. They spoke of other beings and half beings made of as fluid as water and as light as breath they called 'spirit'. They spoke of these spirits and life that existed beyond experiments in laboratories. They spoke of 'Colour': Strange hues and tones and pigments that spread like honey. They spoke of other life with four legs: creatures with a will of their own. Winged Creatures that would soar into the far reaches of space and dance with stars with painted wings and sing songs that told stories of other lands.
To the children of Khoya the words 'Of-their-own' seemed unimaginable. As did words like 'spirit', 'soul' and 'nature'.
To the children of Khoya this was myth. A jigsaw of fantastical mumbo-jumbo jumbled up in the elders' memories. And soon no one listened to those tales either. 
There was no room for fantasy here. Only routine. And magic disrupted routine.
And what's the point of a story if it isn't even real? They said.

Monday, March 15, 2010

Saturday, March 13, 2010

“If you have a garden and a library, you have everything you need.”

-- Marcus Tullius Cicero




Thursday, March 11, 2010





But above all, he was intoxicated.He was addicted to power. and it is this addiction, this intoxication and this blindness that gave birth to a dark powerful force with a life of its own
'The Nasha'
It started as a small puff of smoke that enveloped his heart and wrapped its long vines around it. This gave him indifference.
It then spread to his chest that swelled up as his lungs were taken over by the Nasha. This gave him pride.
Next it spread to his throat and wound its vines around his neck nearly choking him. This gave him cold silence.
Then to his eyes. dilated pupils. Nasha swirling inside like dark pools of sorrow. This gave him blindness.
and having wrapped itself around every nerve and entered every stream that ran through man's body:
finally it penetrated his mind. This brought him death.
And not death of the spirit (for the spirit lives forever) or death of Love (because love exists beyond that) but the death of his compassion.
Which is the worst end of all.

redux-ed
minimized

How Khoya was Lost



Disclaimer- all the text is rambled out right now. desperately needs some doctoring by someone who works with words.

Finished 5 roughs and one fair today.
its 2 a4- folded in the middle.
the text needs to be edited but that i will give to an editor in the final week
is it looking too depressing?? :| 

text to be added:
The spirits were chased out one by one. Poisonous gases were released into the world that punched holes into the layers of spirit and protection that enveloped the earth like a blanket.
Homes were destroyed. Forests burnt down. The sky began to fall, the earth began to quake. Spirit fought back. The sky would cry for days flooding the earth. His greed to control spirit brought terror. His greed to possess and consume land brought wars. And soon it wasn't even land anymore. Soon it was Oil, then Water. and last but most tragically- The Battles of Breath. 
With holes in his sky, with a hole where a heart once existed, surrounded by chaos and cacophony- he had to make a choice- 
Either he embraced the spirit and restored it to a magnificence of its own- let go of his control and need to consume and lived in Harmony.
Or
He built more walls and banished the spirit forever.
And Ofcourse, He chose to banish. 
So he created a glass globe around the earth to block out the clouds that became animals in the sky. He shut out the stars that looked down upon the earth like eyes.
He created large concrete bottlestoppers that stopped rivers from flowing. He scooped out all the multitudes of fish and life in the ocean and replaced it with plastic that he'd consumed and spat out.

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

A Murder of Crows





In the meantime, three crows sat atop a tall tower in Khoya incessantly cawing.
Ofcourse their language is mostly undecipherable for us because it involves great knowledge of semantics. However, if one is to really attempt, their conversations can perhaps be roughly translated.
The Kahoovas are an ancient race from a time before Khoya was lost.
They were given a choice between staying on  or leaving to the land of the skies but after much debate, the kahoovas stayed on.
The reasons for this were long speculated. Some said that perhaps the kahoovas too had been afflicted by the Nasha and therefore their feathers were black.
But this can't be the reason for their return- because sources say they have indeed always been black and this involves an accident of spilled ink and ostriches. But that's another story.
They have also always been shrouded with mystery.
Some believed that the crow could shape shift into a young handsome man, and in this shape- trick people into getting what he desires.
Others say the crows were the spirits of the world's ancestors.
However, the reason for the Kahoovas staying in khoya was simple, having always been the disgruntled minority amongst the birds (the rest of whom were gifted with colour) were given the reservation of being able to fly between all lands as the keeper of sacred law. 
Having been born of ink, their records of the law too were known to be the most meticulously written.

Anyway, so these three crows in question were sitting upon a tall tower in khoya cawing endlessly.
The truth is, they had fallen madly in love with the curling manifestation of the Nasha.
They had always prided themselves on their smooth black tailfeathers.
A blue sheen and shimmer that no creature could replicate.
 Until one day, they saw the Nasha.

Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Spread 2- Draft1 :)

























text to be added-
However, if one is to try and rediscover 'What-once-was'
If one is to attempt to pinpoint when Khoya was lost- it was possibly when the glass sphere was built around the earth.
Before, when the world was a spirit of itself, at first man lived in Harmony with other spirit (because he was intouch with his own).
He saw the network of light. He spoke the language of love, a language without words but only truth.
Everyday on earth was a celebration of this love. And man's voice (strong and sweet then) was part of this great cosmic orchestra.
They would sing in crystal voices about this love. they would spin round and round with the stars. Whirling in ecstacy. Everything was magical.
And I don't mean the mumbo-jumbo sort of magic. I mean Bliss.
one day men and women were distracted while singing. While looking up at the skies and his heart was connected to this great network when suddenly his eye caught something flying glimmering.
It was a firefly. 
'Light that is worn by something apart from the stars' he thought...the idea of having light was interesting to him and he thought about it for days on end.
He wanted it. And then on, when he sang with the orchestra, it wasn't a celebration of love. It was a song of longing.
Having always lived by his need- this 'want' was new and exciting to him. 
7 days and 7 nights later he saw Fire again. One day when all the world creatures were asleep, he snuck up behind the firefly and trapped it in a small glass box.
He labelled this box and it gave him great pleasure that he could see it whenever he wished and it would never ever go away (it had no choice).
Soon he collected more creatures like this. He no longer sang in praise with the rest but instead arranged his collection meticulously in rows.
When the other spirits approached him to ask him why he didn't sing and why he was trapping these creatures and plants he said
'Don't you see? I discovered them and so they are mine'
The spirits didn't understand this logic at all.
But the truth is- that before any pandora's box was opened...it was first sealed up.
and this incessant want to label and claim ownership over was called greed.